HOAX
Outline~
Topic: Hoax
Title: Becareful with hoax
Ts: Stop spreading hoax
Body:
1. We need to know definition of hoax
2. The impact caused by hoax
3. How do we avoid hoax?
Conclusion:
hoax is an attempt to cheat or outsmart readers/listeners to believe in something. The impact of hoax is twofold,imoact on individuals and community impacts. And we must be good at recognizing hoax.
Paragraph:
According to wikipedia,hoax or fake reporting news is an attempt to cheat or outsmart readers/listeners to believe in something,the fake news maker is aware of the news indeed fake. News that is satirical or parody to considered as fake news.
The impact caused by hoax is twofold. Impact to individuals,or peple who spread hoax,credibility is down and make others not believe again. While its impact on society can trigger disputes,commotion and unrest in the community. Even more worse,when it comes to politics and SARA,it can divide split national unity.
At this time we have tobe more carefull with hoax,because the times are increasingly sophisticated ,with many hoax circulating everywhere. Here are many ways to avoid hoax: the source of the news comes from those who cant trusted,the image; photos or videos used are engineered or not even connected to the news,use provocative sentences so that easily influence the reader,and last contains political and SARA elements.
Topic: Hoax
Title: Becareful with hoax
Ts: Stop spreading hoax
Body:
1. We need to know definition of hoax
2. The impact caused by hoax
3. How do we avoid hoax?
Conclusion:
hoax is an attempt to cheat or outsmart readers/listeners to believe in something. The impact of hoax is twofold,imoact on individuals and community impacts. And we must be good at recognizing hoax.
Paragraph:
According to wikipedia,hoax or fake reporting news is an attempt to cheat or outsmart readers/listeners to believe in something,the fake news maker is aware of the news indeed fake. News that is satirical or parody to considered as fake news.
The impact caused by hoax is twofold. Impact to individuals,or peple who spread hoax,credibility is down and make others not believe again. While its impact on society can trigger disputes,commotion and unrest in the community. Even more worse,when it comes to politics and SARA,it can divide split national unity.
At this time we have tobe more carefull with hoax,because the times are increasingly sophisticated ,with many hoax circulating everywhere. Here are many ways to avoid hoax: the source of the news comes from those who cant trusted,the image; photos or videos used are engineered or not even connected to the news,use provocative sentences so that easily influence the reader,and last contains political and SARA elements.
Hello nisa..
BalasHapusSuch a good topic, but i think u need to pay attention to body paragraphs, if you're talking about how to avoid a hoax news in body 1, then as well as in body two and three, you need to be consistent with your thesis statement, thank u 😊
I do not see the introductory paragraph from your essay section. And your essay is like it is not arranged.
BalasHapushello nisa, i think your writing also good, but you should give some explanation about your topic in introductory paraghraph and you must put the thesis statement in introductory paraghraph
BalasHapusAnnyeong nisa. How is yours? I hope you feeling well. This essay is good, actually. But, would you try to make your tittle more interest?
BalasHapusHi nisa .. your essay is quite good, but you must pay attention to the location of the order well.
BalasHapus